I think the pose is really Nice, and Lightning effect weren't vad at all! It looks just like you have woken up in the morning, really.
The shading is also really Nice, and i like how you shaded and curved the bed. The effects on the eyes were also really good, and also very cute!
It's a really good perspective, but there's not do much stuff or items in the room tough. Maybe a table would be Nice, but the rest is really great.
I also like the wall decoration, it kind of symboice (?) RainBow Dash. And also there's a diplome on the wall, i think it's saying ''To best flyer'' I really like it. I also like the pocals (?).
Firstly, I have to say that I really do like the style of lighting that you did in this picture. The rest of the room is dark, but the wash of darkness isn't just some solid color that you placed over-top everything. (Or at least it looks that way :3)
The pose of Rainbow Dash is also very nice for this picture. With her head down and those big eyes, it's easy to get lost in them, and in what the entire picture depicts as a whole. The lighting on her face is spot on as well. And I love the sharpness of the windows.
As for what seems off, not much. Though it's not a major part of the picture, the perspective of the headrest of the bed seems a bit off. Considering the angle of the bed and the under part of the headrest that you can see under the bed, the top part of the headrest should be seen less because it's a stronger angle.
The only other thing that seems a touch off would be the shading on RD's hair. (The top of it at least, above her eyes) If you look at the light source, then all of her hair directly above her eyes should be bathed in light and only dark at the very edges, if even that.
But overall, this is a wonderful picture. And especially the eyes. Stunning.
This picture has a very ominous feel to it, as if she's got you cornered in a wall and she's giving you one last innocent look before she suffocates you with that scarf.
Looks really cute. Very nice colors (i really like her mane ^^). But the thing she's holding in her mouth ( a sock, right? )... well, i think it really looks like a beard XD
The shading is also really Nice, and i like how you shaded and curved the bed. The effects on the eyes were also really good, and also very cute!
It's a really good perspective, but there's not do much stuff or items in the room tough. Maybe a table would be Nice, but the rest is really great.
I also like the wall decoration, it kind of symboice (?) RainBow Dash. And also there's a diplome on the wall, i think it's saying ''To best flyer'' I really like it. I also like the pocals (?).
The pose of Rainbow Dash is also very nice for this picture. With her head down and those big eyes, it's easy to get lost in them, and in what the entire picture depicts as a whole. The lighting on her face is spot on as well. And I love the sharpness of the windows.
As for what seems off, not much. Though it's not a major part of the picture, the perspective of the headrest of the bed seems a bit off. Considering the angle of the bed and the under part of the headrest that you can see under the bed, the top part of the headrest should be seen less because it's a stronger angle.
The only other thing that seems a touch off would be the shading on RD's hair. (The top of it at least, above her eyes) If you look at the light source, then all of her hair directly above her eyes should be bathed in light and only dark at the very edges, if even that.
But overall, this is a wonderful picture. And especially the eyes.
Stunning.
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